Wednesday, October 29, 2008

what else i would like to know about wirting an argument pessay.

i would like to know exactly how to place a arguement on paper. sometimes i find myself getting a little carried away and start giving facts about the issue instead of argueing my point. so i woul d also like to know how you stay on point when trying to attempt an arguement.

Monday, October 20, 2008

audience

i am trying to persuade Martell Coleman, who is 18 years old and is from a very small town in Ohio. he has been brought up in a catholic home.has been attending catholic school his whole life. attends church every wednesday and sunday. believes in pro-life. just recently moved to Minnesota and attends mnsu, isnt really used to the customs at mnsu disagrees very much about abortion.

Monday, October 6, 2008

likes and dislikes about personal essay

what i liked about the personal essay was that i found out that it was alot easier than i thought it would be. it was like i got to tell my story and let others know what i went through, i found it was easy because i put alot of time and thought into my paper. i used my way of talking and my style of writting to get my point across. also liked sharing my past to help show the person i am todayand that i am not ashamed of who i am and where i come from.i like how you dont have to use guidlines facts and stuff like that you and write about whatever
my dislikes on my personal essay well i dont really hasve many dislikes because i really evjoyed writting my personal essay because i got to share thing that happened in mylife to help mold me into the person i am today. but im mad because i didnt read directions and i didnt know it was due because i had to make corrections on it and my zip disk wasnt showing what i saved so know i have to do ir right when i am finished with class.