what i liked and didnt like about writing this paper

well what i liked about this assignment was that i got the chance to really put my thoughts and opinions into this paper. i really enjoyed it alot i was still a little fusturating to really make the argument clear. but i think i did an ok job. one thing i really didnt like about this paper was that i had to make a work cited page and i am not really good at it sense i really qwasnt thought it until i got to college but i tried. overall i liked the assignment.

what else i would like to know about wirting an argument pessay.

i would like to know exactly how to place a arguement on paper. sometimes i find myself getting a little carried away and start giving facts about the issue instead of argueing my point. so i woul d also like to know how you stay on point when trying to attempt an arguement.

audience

i am trying to persuade Martell Coleman, who is 18 years old and is from a very small town in Ohio. he has been brought up in a catholic home.has been attending catholic school his whole life. attends church every wednesday and sunday. believes in pro-life. just recently moved to Minnesota and attends mnsu, isnt really used to the customs at mnsu disagrees very much about abortion.

likes and dislikes about personal essay

what i liked about the personal essay was that i found out that it was alot easier than i thought it would be. it was like i got to tell my story and let others know what i went through, i found it was easy because i put alot of time and thought into my paper. i used my way of talking and my style of writting to get my point across. also liked sharing my past to help show the person i am todayand that i am not ashamed of who i am and where i come from.i like how you dont have to use guidlines facts and stuff like that you and write about whatever
my dislikes on my personal essay well i dont really hasve many dislikes because i really evjoyed writting my personal essay because i got to share thing that happened in mylife to help mold me into the person i am today. but im mad because i didnt read directions and i didnt know it was due because i had to make corrections on it and my zip disk wasnt showing what i saved so know i have to do ir right when i am finished with class.

experience talking to a person of different culture

well i was talking to my neighbor who is from ecuador. i have know her for a few years but i never really had a chance to really talk to her but this past year we communicated alot. i found out about her culture and the certian types of foods they eat, her religion and other neat things. jose is her dads name and in ecudor they love to keep thire yard looking beautiful so when they moved here he decorated her front yard and it absolutly looks beautiful. but one thing that really stood out is this one time i seen them have a goat in thier backyard and they killed it in there yard and put it on a stick and started roasting it that was really disterbing but it was cool at the same time.oh and they also eat guinne pigs lol that was weird seeing us americans have them as pets.but over all my experience talking with her was really fasinating i learned alot and if i could i would try to vist ecuador it sounds like a beautiful place to visit.

idenitity

something that happened to me to help shape my idenitity is when i went on this missions trip to Detroit, Michigan it really made me have a diferent perspective on life. when i went we helped people and children with no home and no food. i just remember seeing kids running around with no shoes on and no cloths just dipers because there parents couldnt afford cloths and i remeber giving this little girl a new pair of shoes and a pink outfit she just loved it.but overall i think this sitiuation i was in help me change the way i view certian things, and have a better outlook on life. this has help me be more of a loving and caring person.

earliest memory

The earlies memory i remember is putting blue playdo in my mothers V.C.R. she was so mad when she found out that i had done that to her stuff, because she found it when it was all hard and she couldnt remove it. she had to go get a new one. and after that i wasnt allowed ro watch movies by myself until i learned not to put things where they dont belong. and after all that i was never ever allowed to play with playdo im my moms house .